Circus Spectators
I have problems reivisng these sentences.?
These setences have errors and I can not 100% understand> _> I need to re-take a course in grammar. 1. The circus trapeze amazing acrobats and other performers took there bows in the center ring. (3) 3. The cheers of spectators and whistles was deafening the little boy covered his ears. (3) 4. Why would anyone bring children too small an environment noisy or crowded sports event that begins at night. (2) (I found three mistakes??)
1. The amazing circus acrobats, trapeze artists and other performers took their bows in the center ring. WHY: (I added two commas and changed "he" to "their") 3. The audience cheers and whistles was deafening. The boy covered his ears. WHY: (I added an apostrophe in "spectators" added a point after deafening and added and capitalize the "T" in "the.") 4. Why would anyone bring children to a small crowds, noisy sporting event that begins in the night? WHY: (I added a comma after crowded and put a question mark the end of the sentence because it is a question.)
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